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いやぁ・・・英文メールは、毎週1回送ろうと思っているんだけど、ついついわすれちゃうんだよね~・・・

今日はこれからアイロンがけもあるし、ちゃっちゃと終えて、サクサク家事をせねば~♪おいらは、居候の身だからさ・・・家事をさせられてるんだ。

でもね、実はおいら今、ハワイアンキルトのふでばこ製作中なので~す。
英文メール→アイロンがけ→ハワイアンキルト!今日中に全部やってやるぅ~!
あと2時間で今日が終わるけど・・・メラメラ。

おいらの英文、どこがまちがってる?

On one hand Edward and Nathaniel were looking for Giselle,
on the other hand, Giselle lived in Robert's house pleasantly.

Actually, Nathaniel could look for Giselle in the park.
But he never told Edward, because he wanted to kill Giselle with an
apple of poison.
He often designed a chance to kill.
When he found Giselle in the park, he changed into a shopboy selling an
apple and he tried to get her to eat the apple.
Fortunatelly, Giselle drop the apple in the park and he missed his
mission by Narissa.

While Edward and Nathaniel was looking for Giselle, they happend to find
a apartment where Giselle lived in.
Edward was looking for her singing in the apartment. Giselle was also
singing about Edward.
At last, they met and Edward gave Giselle a big hug.
But she started to have Robert in her chest.

Until they went back to his castle, Edward and Giselle had a date with.
They went to a movie theater, a park, and so on.
She heard about a date from Robert.
She never know it because she had tried to marry with Edward without
having a date.
They can enjoy a first date in N.Y..

Last day before Edward and Giselle would go back, they were supposed to
join a dance party with Robert and Nancy.
But Giselle didn't have any dress for a party. So, Morgan took Giselle
to a boutique in a hurry, and bought a elegant dress with Robert's
credit card!

正解はこちら!

On one hand Edward and Nathaniel were looking for Giselle,
on the other hand, Giselle lived in Robert's house happily.

Actually, Nathaniel looked for Giselle in the park.
But he never told Edward because he wanted to kill Giselle with a poison apple.
He often designed chances to murder her.
When he found Giselle in the park, he changed into a shopboy selling an
apple and he tried to get her to eat the apple.
Fortunatelly, Giselle drop the apple in the park and he failed Narissa.

While Edward and Nathaniel were looking for Giselle they happend to find
the apartment where Giselle lived.
Edward was looking for her singing in the apartment. Giselle was also
singing about Edward.
At last, they met and Edward gave Giselle a big hug.
But she started to have feelings about Robert in her chest.
(maybe not chest, but rather..HEART??)
Before they went back to his castle, Edward and Giselle had a date *.
They went to a movie theater, a park, and so on.
She had heard about dating from Robert.
She never knew about it because she was meant to marry Edward without
having a date.
They enjoyed a first date in N.Y..

On the last day before Edward and Giselle would go back, they were supposed to
join a dance party with Robert and Nancy.
But Giselle didn't have any dress for a party. So, Morgan took Giselle
to a boutique in a hurry, and bought an elegant dress with Robert's
credit card!

おいらの反省

  • 今回はわりと良かったんじゃなーい?おいら。回りくどいのは相変わらずだけどね~。日本語から考えて訳すのはダメだね。日本語自体が英語より回りくどいコトバだもんね。
  • 「殺す」という単語のkillとmurder。違いは何かと言うと、murderは意図的な殺人!killは人に限らず、暇つぶし(kill a time)とかにも使える幅広いコトバ!この文脈では、Nathanielが意図的にGiselleを殺そうとしているのでmurderが適役だね!
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